Everythings Gone

by Jad   Aug 11, 2010


-Destroying all I know-
-Holding on so tight-
-Feeling so low-
Now where's the light?

The emptiness speaks to me,
Echoing in the night so vast.
Of all that I can see,
Trying to make a contrast.

Losing what I've known,
I try so hard to hold on
But feeling so alone
With everything now gone.

Words are empty as blank paper.
Nothing matters now today.
My life is going away as a vapor;
Everything has begun to decay.

Ending the beginning has begun,
All I can do now is slowly watch.
Time has reached the end of its run
As my eyes are covered--blotched.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Austin
    Your sadness crys from this piece.

    Losing what I've known,
    I try so hard to hold on
    But feeling so alone
    With everything now gone.

    This stanza really caught my eye. It is so hard when you have lost so much. You can feel alone even in a room full of people.
    Great job!
    take care
    Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    The light will shine through eventually, if you wait patiently. A really sad write, each word filled with lots of emotion; but you wrote it perfectly & everything linked together very nicely. Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    U even started this with a very very strong beginning...that caught my whole attention..

    u have really done a gr8 work over here which I realy admire.

    claps for such an amazing piece
    5/5
    KEEp this work flowing !!

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