That Moment...

by Dreamofolwin   Jul 12, 2011


In that moment it transpired, I knew it from the start;
that we were to be together, because you came into my heart.
You transfixed me with your gaze, made all earth and heaven shine;
I really cant explain it, but I'll love you for all time....

Like a firework exploding, somewhere way up high;
like the glittering stars romancing in the midnight sky.
Like a moonbeam dancing, like the smell of a rose;
I really can't explain it, but I love you because....

We were destined to be, it was written by and by;
created for each other, Yes you and I...
Time never will separate what's between you and me;
for I'll love you for all time and eternity.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another super poem, Olwin - a true treasure.
    The imagery in the second stanza is nothing short of beautiful and the rhyme is - as ever - wonderfully pleasing.
    All the very best and keep writing,
    Ben

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Another Nice Write!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    What a lovely and a dreamy imagery :)
    //Like a firework exploding, somewhere way up high;
    like the glittering stars romancing in the midnight sky.
    // the feeling is so beautifully described

    loved reading.

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