The Climb

by ---AL---   Aug 11, 2011

The fog is getting thick,
The walls are caving in,
This life begins to tick,
As lies lay down their sin.
My lips become untied,
My heart begins to teethe,
Suffocation will subside.
If only I could breathe.
The light begins to dim,
As colors begin to show,
So vivid yet so grim,
Will I miss you when I go?


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  • 12 years ago

    by Jessie

    Amazing. short, to the point, but descriptive and powerful.
    "As lies lay down there sin."

    there? their? as lies lay down, they're sin?
    wasnt quite sure

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is so good..i could feel the emotions in this poem. though it sad but it shows the fears of a lover..

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