The Hunter & His Deer

This poem has an opulence in its composition. A unique, unparalleled and thoughtful write.

^Kidding! : P

I like Britt, yet we're not that close, we talked but I don't know the whole story! still I guess that was a good description of love, a hunter looking for his deer, somehow I could imagine it, though your poems usually are too beautiful to be imagined, this write seemed so simple yet held such images that made me just picture the scene. Well, I think the last part where you used one of Britt's titles X's and O's and the petal of her skin, made me know how tender she is, and mostly sensible.

'tangle the milky way
within your hair'

Britt, what shampoo do you use? lol
What I could grasp from this line is that Britt has black hair? because it refers to space or sky or something... well wait, maybe you meant to say that Britt is beautiful in a simple way? Who knows! ;)

'showering your heart with
the feelings of a kaleidoscope'
^

I LOVE it when somebody uses 'shower' in a poem, it seriously brings the poem to life.

What's wrong here?
shower....hair...shampoo o.O
well, I suffer from dandruff! : P

Very wonderfully writenn, Melpo! Loved the write, Britt obviously did too. ; D

^Kidding! : P

I like Britt, yet we're not that close, we talked but I don't know the whole story! still I guess that was a good description of love, a hunter looking for his deer, somehow I could imagine it, though your poems usually are too beautiful to be imagined, this write seemed so simple yet held such images that made me just picture the scene. Well, I think the last part where you used one of Britt's titles X's and O's and the petal of her skin, made me know how tender she is, and mostly sensible.

'tangle the milky way
within your hair'

Britt, what shampoo do you use? lol
What I could grasp from this line is that Britt has black hair? because it refers to space or sky or something... well wait, maybe you meant to say that Britt is beautiful in a simple way? Who knows! ;)

'showering your heart with
the feelings of a kaleidoscope'
^

I LOVE it when somebody uses 'shower' in a poem, it seriously brings the poem to life.

What's wrong here?
shower....hair...shampoo o.O
well, I suffer from dandruff! : P

Very wonderfully writenn, Melpo! Loved the write, Britt obviously did too. ; D

Mel! write about me and Anas. : D

Agreed with all the above comments. This is an alluring composition. The last two stanzas really narrow it down to a home run. Each word, each line precisely penned. A mystical piece composed with a wave of magic wands. Very creative.