Ooooh yeah. I hear a strong voice, bursting at the seams. Wonderfully done. I even liked your truncated ellipses, as if they too were aborted and didn't deserve fulfilment. Last three lines were class: all attitude, yet steeped in a sadness literally beyond words that I can wholly sympathise with.
9 years ago
How creative of you to write this, a very unique way to refer yourself to a poem, just amazing, congratulations on your winning :)
Yea Im late but i wanted to drop by anyway. =p i have to say that this poem of yours surprised. I don't think I've ever read something so short by you, while exposing one night metaphor. So i applaud you for taking this turn for once in your poetry. Abortion is truly a sensitive subject and to combine it with poetry truly reflects the way you feel about your art. You also managed to set this right cruel mood by the simplest of words. Nicely done.