My Sweet Angel

by Jenna Bella Oldridge   Nov 7, 2011


This is where our path ends
It is here we say goodbye
Time past before we knew it
Years in the blink of an eye

This is where our path ends
It is here we say so long
You will be at peace now
So I have to be strong

This is where our path ends
It is here we say fair well
Your earthly body will be no more
But I'll have memories left to tell

This is where our path ends
It is here we say goodnight
Rest in peace my sweet angel
I hope you're sleeping tight

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  • 12 years ago

    by Debbi

    This poem is amazing. I really enjoy your work. I love that all your poems tell a story that I can relate to.

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I like the repetition in the poem and you really made emotions shine through 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I like it, but this is where our path ends
    It's repeated in every stanza and sometimes it gives the feeling like its force. Perhaps just use it in two stanzas to make it's point and to not make it feel force and To allow the reader to get caugh in the rest of the poem that is full of emotion.
    I also like the ending. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    U kept it short ,simple and vry emotional..and it touches the heart of the reader..bt i think u shud have atleast one or two stanzas to give it a suitable length,
    Ful points

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