Pieces of my heart

Aww so much emotion i love it!!! keep your head up though some boys come and go and he is just one of those.. your true love is out there
100/100 :)

Agree with all the coments above the fact its really feelings make the poem so powerful 5/5

Whole poem is awesome,but this part simply touched my heart, so well i can picture out these emotions....

"Pieces of my heart slowly
falling apart, hitting the ground
with a loud crash shaking the floor,
tears streaming out my eyes,
shaking from the pain,
I can't believe this is happening."

brilliant work as always.... <3 :)

An amazing poem hun!

I love the force of emotions you have shown in your writting. The words are really strong and you can tell that you got completely hurt by this person

I love poems like these where you can get to vent a little. It's like a release as each line you write - feels as though you are telling the person directly

Trying to remain strong,
reminding myself you let me go,
you wouldn't hear me out,
wouldn't give me a chance to explain,
how can you just throw our love away
after everything I forgave you for?
Do I really mean that little to you?

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, how many
times do I have to say it?
It never should have happened,
one huge mistake that got taken
to a completely different level,
I gave you that chance you begged for,
and you can't do that for me?

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I love these two stanzas

You can tell you've done so much for this person and forgave him for doing you wrong and he still treats you like this

I love this poem hun, well done

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