Jealousy

I like it Meena a great poem about a raging emotion and you really described it well this raw emotion. what i liked is how few lines and words you needed to use. words like control, wildfire, calamity, worst, downfall and smile. the word smile captures your meaning very well in this poem been a human being this is certainly true that sometimes we smile at another's misfortune. your captured this emotion well in your poem.

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Sounds like you speak from experience. i can relate. a little bit of jealousy can motivate you to improve yourself. but too much can drive you to hatred. in the same way, humility can lead to no self esteem or pride. and then it can lead to an inferiority complex. we must be careful to take all things lightly and with a grain of salt. too much of a good thing is a bad thing.

Very Nice and So True. Great Job Meena!!!!

Wow! This one really spoke to me.

To this raging master
you become a slave --great line

I like that this poem is a warning as well, should you succumb to jealousy it will change who you are as a person. nicely done!

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Very true and you have expressed it so well. Jealousy can only bring misery ...

// It is you
that misery will caress.
// indeed.
strong and inspiring write