The Obsession (Bulimia)

Bulimia isnt the answer :( you are perfect the way you are....you should never have to change. but great writing ! :)

I like this poem and it is so relevant to todays young girls who are all under pressure to look good and a certain way. all of this pressure brought on by the media and what their idea of beauty is. apart from that your poem is structurely very good and the rhyming and timing is good can't say much more only well done and keep up the good work.

Very moving and so true. It reminded me of a song. Good beat and rythm to it. Love this piece.
5/5
~Kitty

Wow, I'm Sure This Can Relate to So many people.
I felt the pain of the writer, I honestly did.
This is a perfect example of pain and jealousy.
I Loved It, Nice Write!
5/5 Jessi.

This is so sad. I don't like that girls harm themselves to look like someone else, whether it be bulimia, plastic surgery, etc...the "perfect" girls they wanna look like have only looks and prolly not happy lives in other areas, so we might as well enjoy our skin and forget about looking like someone else, it'd be a boring world if we were all thin and looked alike...

Deep poem, I liked the repetition, gave it meaning and a serious tone. Good job!!