Disgust Myself

by Jenna Bella Oldridge   Dec 27, 2011


Greasy hair
Chapped lips
Bad breath
Fat hips

Pale flesh
Piggy nose
Chunky legs
Old clothes

Cross eyed
Hard skin
Dirty nails
Dubble chin

Stumpy toes
Big ears
Body oder
Salty tears

Goofy teeth
Red spots
Blackheads
The lot

Uni brow
Brown mole
Dark cicrles
Can't console

Ugly me
Disgust myself
Such a wretch
Wish I was somebody else

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  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A heartbreaking piece, what I love about your poetry too is that it is simple and so raw, it's powerful with those few words that reflect how you feel. I think we can all relate that we sometimes we feel not good enough, but don't get down on yourself. You are beautiful- your soul is unique and made to be loved :)

    Wondreful flow and rhyme, it hits the mind hard with all the imagery.

    Take care!

  • 12 years ago

    by AngelDust

    This is amazing. It really blew me a way, it was like a slap across the face. You never cease to amaze me but each poem surprises me b/c its sooo good. I haven't read your work in a while and it was like a breath of fresh air. Excellent write : )

    Dani
    xox

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    It's simple but effective and shows a lot of emotion 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I'm not being insensitive in anyway so please don't take this as such in case this is how you feel. But I had to smile reading it, I think everyone has been to that point in their life.

    I liked the shorts lines, the way it flowed and the deep seeded meaning. It was an excellent write and one easy to understand and relate too.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    That hit me to the core. I tried not to read it quickly because with the shortness in evrery line makes you uninterested. But slowly, I felt the sadness and the dissatisfaction you have of your own figure (true or not.. I felt that).

    But a beam of light comes...should come... you're beautiful in the inside.

    Great piece.