Fallen but Not Broken

I like the rythm, the message and everything. Great poem...

It's true I've finished
that my soul has vanished
left alone in the sadness
that will never leave

Yet if you look deep inside
you truly have nothing to hide
the pain is what has you made stronger
then all the rest

I have fallen from grace
to this cold, unforgiven place
but, I will never break

Amazing lines, sadness so well desribed
a painful thing, this sadness
feeling left alone in this forbidden place
it makes us in time so much stronger
5/5

Nice poem and nice way to make the club's name to use lol

I really enjoyed it, this is an outtanding poe, i think it's one of your greatest, very inspiring, and excatly how I feel, wonderful job

Allie you are strong and you have a whole family here who love you and are here for you. wee'll all help you get through this