Did You Feel Your Best

by CathyButterflyJC   May 25, 2012


Did you feel your best
When you put my dreams to rest
And killed me
How great could you be
When you could see
The bleeding in me
As you decided to leave
In us you no longer believed

Did you feel your best
When you put our love to rest
When you slashed
What beats in my chest
And the knife went in deep
So many promises never to keep
So many wishes tears come
If I try to speak

Did you feel your best
When you put my life to rest
Love
And laughter
Was all I was after
But you threw it in the fire
Cracks spilt my heart
Do you like seeing me apart

Did you feel your best
When you put my hopes to rest
Am I suppose to be perfect
Without that
Would you have never left
Don't say you weren't a lair
Did I need perfect hair
Clear face
Do I deserve to be replaced
Can I again feel your embrace
Can my knuckles have your fingers traced

Did you feel your best
As you felt your love rest
I'm living in the old ages
Those old days
I feel like I'm trapped in a cage
The past is where I'm lingering
Can I take it much longer
As your gone
No one's better
So how can I move on

Did you feel your best
Disintegrating happiness to rest
When you let my heart down
When you put my emotions to the test
Left me to wallow in the after life
Of all our breaths
And hope you know one day
That I was the best

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm it is cool poem so emotional
    but I think it is time to use punctuation it will make your poem flow better
    I like your word choice and how u repeated 1st line in every stanza and the style in 2nd line was cool too
    Overall great poem
    5/5 keep writing =)

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwwww sweety this poem is soo emotional! and yes it hurts but one day you won't hurt anymore okay sweety? and i love this poem! 5/5 from me lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The heart often has good intension
    but for some reason or another we let
    the one down tht loves us the most
    So many questions, yet no answers
    By the time they realize its often too late
    Your gain, his loss
    5/5