FRIENDS.... ( An Acrostic)

by Dreamofolwin   Jun 11, 2012


Feeling happy deep inside...
Releasing tears that needed cried.
Interested in all I do,
Eternally I will thank you.
Nothing can destroy our bond,
Death, hell, fire, for we are strong.
Such repose with you I find, we belong.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Olwin.

    A lovely, "friendly" acrostic here that rhymes! Personally I find making an acrostic rhyme and keeping the lines tight and relevant a very difficult thing to do - you've done it here.
    Excellent work. Stay well,
    Ben

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Good poem, Dreamofolwin.
    Liked your words a lot.
    Friendship, your poem says it all..

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Friends are like treasure and to have one who are always with you no matter what is a true gem!
    Nicely penned acrostics where the depth of the writer's feelings is captured in each line :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Excellent acrostic written with such emotion and vigor.

    Well done!

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