I am Deep

Very nice:)

Bukowski said it,

"It's so easy to be a poet and so hard to be a man."

again, solid.

Paul Gondwe,

I am living in a place where war never stops. Still Syria means the world to me, and I can never imagine myself living away from it. I can tell how hard it feels when you see your beloved ones suffering, even if countries. It's like...you really can do nothing about it but you try anyway. It is sad. So sad.

I am sorry for your loss, I don't know Daniel nor Alex nor how you lost them but I'm sorry. It feels like this poem was meant to let out your emotions, those suppressed emotions. And you did a great job. :)

Oh it can be hard to live in a place that we love so much, a place that is our home and there are certain things going on that we wish weren't. Where people are being hurt or dying, it gets me angry and this poem broke my heart but you wrote it so well.

Awesome poem

x

Its vry intense