Violent Vortex (Shanzi).

by Steven Beesley   Jun 29, 2012


Mighty Typhoon
Such turbulent storm

The incessant winds
so powerful

No correct path
Force of Nature
Destruction always

Shanzi:

The Shanzi is a fascinating and flexible new form. In December 2005 Andreas Gripp, a Canadian poet living in London, Ontario announced his newly created form.

The Shanzi is written in 7 lines with breaks of 2, 2 and 3. The poem contains 31 syllables arranged in this manner: 4-5, 5-4, 4-4-5.

The first 2 lines introduce the image/subject; the next 2 lines amplify what is affected by the image/subject; the last 3 lines focus on a new image/subject that complement and provide a meditative conclusion. Shan-zi may be titled.

Note: This is my Shanzi form contest poem submitted elsewhere.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Another very interesting form and you have used it so well to describe the force of nature..excellent write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Ooooh this was great. Gonna have to give this form a try one day. Loved the way you did it, great flow and everything. Nice work. -Nik

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    Such a creative piece, and this form seems very interesting. Amazing, for the attempt and the content.