What you've created

by Jump from Life   Jan 17, 2013


I pray you are looking down
upon those you left behind.
Why did you pop those pills?
And let yourself die?!?!?

I can't imagine what you thought.
I just pray you've seen the tears
spilling over our dreary eyes.
Dear, how could you cause us such pain?

*I know this isn't good. Heck, I don't care if you hate it. But honestly, this is something I needed to do to get emotions out. So, if you hate it. Don't rate or comment, okay?*

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  • 11 years ago

    by KRYSTAL B

    I also lost a loved one from prescription pills and I completely understand how hurt and mad you can feel all at the same time, hang in there, very good writing I hope it helps please write more

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Baby girl NO ONE can say anything bad about this poem since it shows your pain and the suffering and if they do then they are retched people to say anything bout losing a person!!! but i think this poem shows sooo much raw emotions... i've never been able to put so much raw emotions in mine! 5/5

    Queen Ash

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Aww love it