You Won't Leave Me Lonely

This one caught my attention right away as well. I noticed that the first line:

~I've been given such short time~

is later explained with:

~Although our days are numbered
my cancer can't be cured
You've given me life, by becoming my wife
my prayers have been answered~

It shows that you would spend every second fighting for what you love and what you believe in. and in the end when the reader finds out she became your wife it was a sigh of relief! dreams come true and prayers have been answered!

Keep up the good work, one piece of advice is to watch your flow. I was just a little lost on how to read it with "mono-tone" flow.

*~Britt-Bratt~*

This is a very lyrical heart song that could be set to music

I love this poem. the flow is great and it kept me reading through the whole thing. I love it

This poem is very lyrical and has a great rhythm