by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko Nov 20, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
8:00 PM |
I really loved the way you structured the poem - it definitely drew me in to all the amazing imagery and ideas within it. The way you expressed the sense of time, waiting and sadness is amazing! |
by Jenni Marie
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by Britt
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by Saerelune
A very interesting lay-out of words, I feel it reflects the mood of the persona (not sure if that's intentional or not). Well written and congrats on the win! |
by Saerelune
A very interesting lay-out of words, I feel it adds to the mood of the persona. Well written and congrats on the win! |