in regards to the last image you gave me i was taken back timidly. the close of the prose, For me, is far too sullen. But the composition here is fantastic... I see what you mean of course -which lead one unto some eagerness to " justify" the details and images used in your piece . . . Contemplating. Tantalizing. Fun.
lucky me I read this one. .. I like it even the repetition of some lines making this write sounds like a song. ...I like the imaginary and the emotion. ...you need to close your eyes just to see him. ..damn I can relate to this one. ..