To A Friend

by Koan   Jan 29, 2016


Life,
is an underwater moonlight
that fades away swiftly
in the ocean of time..

Finding
and holding onto
the gilded eddies
of beautiful people
is what makes this journey
light up a thousand times brighter
than any Sun...

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  • 2 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Life,
    is an underwater moonlight
    that fades away swiftly
    in the ocean of time..

    .
    .
    The opening is a lovely one, makes the reader wanna keep on to find out what your deal with life is.
    Gives them expectations
    and help them create an imagination of what that could be.

    I love it.

    Then we have this

    Finding
    and holding onto
    the gilded eddies
    of beautiful people
    is what makes this journey
    light up a thousand times brighter
    than any Sun...

    it gives us more about what makes this life beautiful.
    People around us who we love and trust are the ones who makes this journey worthwhile.

    I enjoyed reading your work. keep on writing.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Sorry on double post.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    A beautiful poem full of elegance.
    A beautiful heart makes for a beautiful person and often a wonderful friendship and once you have that you shouldn't let it go because as you say in a much better way it makes the world go round much better than money and other things, if that makes sense.

    All in all a lovely write.

    Take care, Em

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    A beautiful poem full of elegance.
    A beautiful heart makes for a beautiful person and often a wonderful friendship and once you have that you shouldn't let it go because as you say in a much better way it makes the world go round much better than money and other things, if that makes sense.

    All in all a lovely write.

    Take care, Em

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful people are wonderful.. the heart of a person is brighter than the moon if the soul is filled with compassion...

    this poem is loving , elegant and the wording whisks you away to the moon. Beautiful!