To A Friend

From the shore of ocean is where the gemstones and diamond shines brighter like the rays of the sun.

Resplendent Work!!! A Great Write. Indeed!

Life,
is an underwater moonlight
that fades away swiftly
in the ocean of time..

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The opening is a lovely one, makes the reader wanna keep on to find out what your deal with life is.
Gives them expectations
and help them create an imagination of what that could be.

I love it.

Then we have this

Finding
and holding onto
the gilded eddies
of beautiful people
is what makes this journey
light up a thousand times brighter
than any Sun...

it gives us more about what makes this life beautiful.
People around us who we love and trust are the ones who makes this journey worthwhile.

I enjoyed reading your work. keep on writing.

Sorry on double post.

A beautiful poem full of elegance.
A beautiful heart makes for a beautiful person and often a wonderful friendship and once you have that you shouldn't let it go because as you say in a much better way it makes the world go round much better than money and other things, if that makes sense.

All in all a lovely write.

Take care, Em