A Snowflake

by Hellon   Oct 21, 2016


Unique ice crystal
forms intricate lattice effect
upon my window pane

and...

as my finger traces
its beautiful shape
it

disappears...

leaving a silhouette of
emptiness
marked in condensation.

@Hellon 21st October 2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Hellon,

    This feels as a metaphor for the elusiveness of life. You can and need to take in as much of you can of all the beauty, love and happiness to be had, but you can never truly hold on to it, as nothing lasts forever.

    Well done!

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    So beautiful, the visuals are stunning.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A beautiful and delicate little write, Hellon. Nice to see you back.

    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    I love this piece. It's so sad but delicate

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello,

    Nice little piece. ..I like the layout. ....

    well done
    Gel

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