Earth mother-line unit palindrome

by Brenda   Mar 26, 2017


The sins of our fathers
we shouldn't project upon the children
our carelessness to these lands
causing Earth Mother to weep tears of acid
blackened and hollow we have made their souls
their skin etched with the acid that falls from the sky
they pay for our carelessness to the lands we trod upon
we have projected upon the children
the sins of our fathers
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The sins of our fathers
we have projected upon the children
they pay for our carelessness to the lands we trod upon
their skin etched with acid that falls from the sky
blackened and hollow we have made their souls
causing Earth Mother to weep tears of acid
our carelessness to these lands
we shouldn't project upon the children
the sins of our fathers

A line unit palindrome is designed to be read from top to bottom and bottom to top.

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  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    you are right . We internalize their sins and project it to our children. Nicely put!

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Frank, I appreciate your thoughts-

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda,
    Fantastic!! Well done on writing such a hard style of poetry.. :)
    the content is also amazing!

    Well done..

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Nams, I appreciate you! Hugs-

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda,

    You know what I think of these forms and I can only admire you for writing them. This is wonderful stuff. Artistic, if you don't mind me saying!

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Ben. I am trying to get better at these, One day I want to do an epic one. I really do appreciate your kind words.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Fantastic Brenda as always xx

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Em, thank you so much-you really have to try one of these one of these days-

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