Abused with compassion

by Mark Rawlins   Mar 28, 2017


I scribble in obscurity,
enthused by a passion.
I quibble without surety,
amused in a fashion.
I nibble for security,
I'm bruised, scarred and ashen.
I dribble with maturity,
abused with compassion.

I sneer with gross profanity,
enthused by a passion.
I hear you call it vanity,
amused in a fashion.
I veer towards insanity,
I'm bruised, scarred and ashen.
I fear for all humanity,
abused with compassion.

We're on our arse! Severity!
Enthused by a passion.
They have the brass temerity
(amused in a fashion)
to try to pass austerity,
all bruised, scarred and ashen,
for middle-class prosperity -
Abused with compassion.

Irate at the bureaucracy,
enthused by a passion.
Can't tolerate hypocrisy,
amused in a fashion.
I hate all this autocracy,
we're bruised, scarred and ashen.
I wait for true democracy -
Abused with compassion.

So I scribble in obscurity,
enthused by a passion.
I quibble without surety,
amused in a fashion.
I nibble for security,
I'm bruised, scarred and ashen.
I dribble with maturity,
abused with compassion.

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is splendid and profound. I really do like repetition! They create a really powerful effect.

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    Your words are so powerful

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow! This is such a striking and powerful piece of work! Extraordinary job!

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    So here we all stand,
    Abused by compassion
    Our hearts and soul ripped out and burned
    Dead and truly ashen.

    We still take our chance
    A phoenix from those flames.
    It's what we have to do
    Or else be burned away.

    Favorite definitely. Spectacular!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    so glad this is nominated. Your words are simply refreshing!

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