Anonymous Falling Stars

Well done! I liked this one...talk about feeling like an outcast... sad poem but nice write! :)

Great piece!!! Amazing imagery

Wow what a heart wrenching piece with a touch of metaphysics! Great write Mel.

One small and tiny suggestion I have for this piece, is the last word of your poem.
When ending a poem, it sounds so lovely and flowy when you use a two or three syllable word. Death is a sudden stop to your poem....try the word alive...just to yourself you don't have to add it...I'm just want to give you another angle to look at....

This poem is breathtaking, I do hope it Grace's the front page!

There is nothing more I can add that has not already been said

Simply wonderful

Craig x