Addiction - Freedom (Double Acrostic)

by Michael   Sep 6, 2017


Anchored upon bare terra firmA
Drowned in a place of desolateD
Depression and agonising dreaD
Induced with compulsive stimulI
Conjuring brain waves of paniC
Torturing minds with contempT
Inflicting pain within you and I
Opening an endless journey intO
Never ending feelings of obsessioN

Forgiving; ourselves oF
Ruinous mad behaviouR
Extinguishing the sterilE
Enslavement of our lifE
Diverge from the itcheD
Odium’s; and slip untO
Mindful and restful calM

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  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, you kicked butt and took names! What an inventive acrostic! Loved it!!!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Brenda, thank you so much x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crikey! I'll know I'm a 'real' poet when I can achieve something like this! This is the first time I've across an acrostic thingamy on this site and I'm so impressed!
    'Ruinous mad behaviour' perfectly defines addiction. I'm in awe Michael x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Kitty Kat,
      What lovely words of inspiration x
      Thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Amazing work dude

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Craig :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You nailed it..

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Andrea x

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    After reading this never ending feeling of obsession feeling like mindfulness restless calm.

    Pure genius!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MrL

      Wonderful comments as ever :)

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