Unfinished symphony

by Michael   Feb 19, 2018


A solo performance-
you played out; within me
upon my stage of vulnerability

preying behind the curtain of
my blind-spot to release an
infernal act that hypnotised;
my emotional intelligence
seducing my mind
swaying to the pendant
of your charm offensive
corrupted from your knowledge

You began by manipulating
the strings of my heart.
with my love falling out of tune;
to the tone of your mercy
that played over and over
motioning a perpetual echo
of my learned behaviour

your big bands bashed;
banging my head
against a brick wall
with a repetitive
motion

I hushed you with
my break-down
but you would beat –
not the hell, but
my confidence
out of my mind.

Paralysed.

my strength weakened.

and weakened

until.

i sang the chorus.
that finally
blew you away!

and your symphonic
pychosis

was unfinished.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Symphonic pychosis .... Wonderful

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This unfinished symphony is magnificent

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Milly such lovely comments thank you :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Be still my heart

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A very strong piece indeed. Full of such vivid imagery and emotion. Definitely has that wow factor for me. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      wow! that is a lovely compliment Miss Milly, thank you :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your choice of words and the images it conjures grips
    the mind and it takes into the depths of the emotion which
    hurts within...almost can touch it...a touching write...very
    strongly penned.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Meena,
      for your lovely words :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Perfectly said best wishes Milly x

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