In This Moment

by Acoustic Odyssey   Mar 21, 2018

In this moment
as the sun sneaks behind the trees
pretending not to watch
you knit your fingers
into mine


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  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully intimate and I love how the brevity here captures that moment, yet doesn't give so much to the reader. I like the emphasis of "...stay", that small simple plea. That desire.

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    lovely little piece and clever


  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    This really is quite lovely. It gave us a sneak peek into a budding romance. Well done-

  • 2 years ago

    by Hellon took me into your special moment and let me share it with you but...what happened afterwards you keep to yourself as you should. Very simple..not sugar coated or " pink ribbony" just, well lovely really...

  • 2 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I love the simplicity of this beautiful and evocative poem which mixes landscape and emotion so well

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