My M --Haiku

by Acoustic Odyssey   Jan 21, 2019


There she is, my moon
lighting my darkness, like a missing piece
of a firefly

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  • 1 year ago

    by Koan

    This is a great Haiku but you need to rewrite the 3d. closing line.
    It has to have a punch to it! A phrase, that reflects on the first two lines yet it will give reader a punch , kind of leaving you breathless because the meaning so so deep....
    You know what i mean right?! Amd you will recall that poem a year later...
    I have read Haikus that when I finished reading it I was in tears... They were that meaningful...
    Anyway, Im sorry if you think this was a bit much... lol

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What beautiful imagery. There is so much depth in such a few words. Loved it. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What beautiful imagery. There is so much depth in such a few words. Loved it. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely little piece with some beautiful imagery captured in very few words.

    All the very best,
    Ben

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