A poem that connects suicidal ideations with the death of loved ones, and I know the story behind this. That makes it all more poignant.
I would like it better if you put a period after death.
After all, it is the end.
I did not nominate this because I love you, but because you did a wonderful job with this Senryu and it deserves recognition.
Thanks for sharing.
2 years ago
by Em (marmite)
I liked the power this piece has although hard hitting (I hope not literal) as it's only a few words so packs a real kick in the gullet.. My only query is the title as it's the last word of the whole piece.. How about 'grim reaper?'
As I said previously I do hope it isn't literal and that you are well.