Calgary Wisps

by Fraegduu   Nov 17, 2018

The moon was sat tight
After Dusk’s light
Up in the sky
To me,
really. It said
Keep quiet my
Young child, it’ll
Be Morning soon.
Time moved slower
Than ever without sleep
Like an Hourglass set for a year


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  • 8 months ago

    by Eros

    It's been years now, though I enjoyed it so much in every way that I still think it's valid to give it my 2 cents. I love a concrete one that doesn't force to be it and simply is, easily and making sense with the poem, which by the way it also not even a little dull or time-waster - it completely pays off with each line I read, getting better and better, but my favourite part, for sure, is to only near the end understand the title and have some sort of epiphany that makes me want to re-read it all again with new understanding. That's an experience that worths a like.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I do like this concrete form. Creating these images with meaning is fun, right? Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    What a cool write! Love the hourglass.

  • 5 years ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Absolutely love this write! Wonderful work x

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I like the hourglass you draw.

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