Blended Emotions (Syntuit)

by Star   May 7, 2019


I wrote poems with
letters that do not exist;

for they understand me.

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    the 'syntuit' form is a versatile one. Like the haiku and senyru it should create imagery and deliver a 'turn' from line 2 to 3. I like to write and read all 3 forms so they clearly offer that image/ idea in a way that evokes an emotional response.
    If I understand correctly, I believe your 'letters' are without form but are understood by you/r heart.

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      Yes that’s what I meant, but I think this one wasn’t properly written.
      Thank you for the comment :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Me don’t understand . Who are they? The letters or the blended emotions? Or something else?

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      I knew it was confusingggg, maybe you could choose whatever fits your mood? Hehe
      I have missed your honest comments ^_^

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is deep and so much said in a few lines. All the very best

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much for the comment and nomination, I did not expect this to be nominated :)

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