Love is ( cinquain )

by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald   Jun 4, 2019


Love is
Like an ocean
Flowing all over me
Making me feel alive inside
And free. .

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  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Wham! Beautiful... the ocean I could hear while reading your poem :)
    Keep writing my lady friend M

    • 5 months ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Thank you so much Michael ! :)
      .... Your comment means s lot. And I'll keep penning ! :D
      ~ Olwin

  • 6 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I like this and so sorry I missed this.
    If I dare say, a little risky. X

    • 6 months ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Whats a little risky? ... Youve lost me...! Sorry... Haha
      ( I'm a wee bit slow sometimes lolol)

      But glad you liked the poem! :D and didn miss it completely! HA

      All the best ~ Olwin Lee :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well, this is a lovely little piece.

    Thanks for posting.

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely put Lee! I feel like that, love is a wonderful experience!

  • 6 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Love is a vast ocean and never stops
    giving...nicely penned :)

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