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by Lindsay Aug 10, 2020
Sadness, depression /
Metal shavings swiftly spread;
burning flames of blue-white shed.
Labeled instructions hereby read;
'Senseless Machine Crafted From Lead.'
Mechanical gears rotated round;
grinding echoes of empty sound.
Fastened never to be found;
lifelessly weeping from its mound.
Maybe I went too far but this made me think of how people shape themselves to fit in a society. How they “engineer” change who they are just to feel like they belong.
I may be completely off, but to me this is a powerful piece!
That is exactly what my piece represents! :) Thank you for acknowledging it.
by Aiko (Dreamsurfer)
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