A Soldier's Frosty Field
by Ben Pickard Apr 26, 2021
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A crispy silver moonlight shone |
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2 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Belated congratulations, Ben. I like this poem, especially the near rhymes. Often a rhyme that shared a sound like the "T' in Frost and Night offers an excellent subtle lift that is nice to see.
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2 years agoby Ben Pickard
Thank you, Michael
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2 years ago
by debbylyn
Haven’t been on the site in quite some time. Glad to see you’re still here and still writing such lovely verses. Very moving... well deserved win!
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2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Good to see you back and many thanks for your comment.
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2 years ago
by Keira Pickard
Congratulations on your win, Dad!
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2 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
I can't really add to what others have expertly done, other than, i enjoyed reading this and know i will come back more than once to nestle in its magic.
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2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Michael and Hellon - thank you both
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2 years ago
by Hellon
We had our Anzac Day here on 25th and, once again we could not attend the dawn service because of Covid. Someone went to the top of the hill and played the last post along with some other appropriate music through loudspeakers so every corner of this place could here it...it was pretty cool and a creative way of remembering those served their countries. Your poem is another fitting way of remembering those we never came back...brought a little lump to my throat.
