Cold Feet

Thanks for being nice, I can't see how anyone really likes this as it has ZERO rhyme or rhythm

The last two lines were as beautiful and hard hitting as they come. Really wonderful

Here I saw the poet in you::
"But I won't ask you to stay
Because I love you"

Love, here, evolves to an unselfish entity.
You growing soul

Here I saw the poet in you::
"But I won't ask you to stay
Because I love you"

Love, here, evolves to an unselfish entity.
You growing soul