Every Single Day.

by Marta   Aug 5, 2004


In the chilly morning
I see the sun arise
I yawn pathetically
And open my eyes.
Another lonely day
Unwanted and alone
More time to spend
Utterly unknown.

My soul painfully aches
With every breath I cease
From friends to family
The pain will never ease.
No one to turn to
Many feelings hidden
So bottle up inside
I did not cry.. no I didn't.

Take a closer look
Upon my bloody arms
Each tells a story
From love to harm.
Depression it lives
The pain in my eyes
Lost and neglected
Forever it cries.

In the chilly night
I see the sun die
I cut pathetically
And close my eyes.
Another passing night
Unwanted and betrayed
This is what I feel
Each and every single day.

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  • 15 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    Hey gr8 poem, i noe exactly wat ur tlking about.

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    This has good feeling, but I think that the rhyming lines need more length consistency when read out loud. It seems like when someone write a rhyming poem, it needs to have really great rhythym to sound good to me. 'Unwanted and alone
    More time to spend
    Utterly unknown.'

    Perhaps you could switch alone and unknown.
    Keep writing though!

  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    omg this poem is excellent it has such a good flow to it! its a beautiful poem filled with emotion but put across brilliantly as a poem great work 5/5
    bec xXx
    oh and sorry i would comment some more poems but i dont hav much time comment u bak later promise

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    Thank you all so much for the honest comments. And yeah, I guess I do go through this everyday. Although I'm seeking help, I hope I'll get through. Once again, thanks for your comments, it means soooo much to me.
    xoxo

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