Shattered Past

by HOLLY ARMER   Aug 10, 2004


Twisted visions behind my tears.
Lies echoing through the years.

Face's splitting...becoming two.
Loving someone...I never knew.

Pain striking as our past shatters.
I've lost what truly matters.

Deception slowly tears me apart.
As love slips through my broken heart.

*Any vote/comments appreciated*

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  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    wow this is magic,
    i can really relate, it almost made me cry, it really struck a note with me. its very creative i loved the words you used infact i loved the whole poem awsome work
    >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    This is a really good poem. I could almost feel every word. Very nice

    -Bryce~

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    Darn that 3 minute rule! I tried to give u a phat five...........so here it is (*****) I adored the last line

  • 19 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Great poem i loved every line of it, so well written :)

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