by Robert Sep 1, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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I know not what I did wrong, |
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Cool-my bad-wicked cool. I loved the darkness surrounding this piece. Very nice word choice and very nice flow. A great poem. |
by None
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leaving their bodies as shells in earth?s crust.... |
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That was unique...not expected....but anyways it was really good, flowed well and rhymed amazingly....wow absolutely awesome!!! |
by Nici
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This is not the sort of poem that I would normally read and so it is harder to find the words to describe how I feel about it. I will however say that it is another imaginative piece, with a wide use of vocab. |
by Sarah Ann
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Wow...This was so different! a pleasure to read. Very dark and intriguing. I like reading these types of poems...It had a good background. Interesting and excellent write my friend! xxx |