by hayley williams Sep 15, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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The crimson blood lies in pools on the concrete |
by Kristin
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Creepy...remind me not to become good friends with you! AHH! lol j/k great job! |
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a little creepy *scooches away* |
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Perhaps it is whack ... but it's good, and I like it!! |
by Eibutsina
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Ummm this poem was amazing! Like the stoyrline you used was so very unique and the descriptions and rhythm flowed soooo well together! You did an wonderful five minute job - damn im jealous i wish it would take me five mins to write something this spectacular!!! Good on you hayley this is one of my faves i have ever read on this site!!! |
by Andrea
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wow...really good poem! |