by Robert Sep 17, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Speak not a word because I will not hear, |
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I like this poem a lot more than the others. I flows well and has a good subject. Well done. Though I do find that some of the rhyming in your poems feels forced. |
by miss scooby
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OH MY...i pray that didnt happen...if it did i am so very sorry. |
by Dorotea©
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Hmm... |
by W H O R E
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Wow. This is very nicely written. So sorry if this is based around a true event. *hug* 5/5 |
by VampyraKiâ€
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Dang your good at writing |