Anguish and Hurt

by Dark Savior   Oct 9, 2004


Why is it when your around i always lose my high
why is it that you always make me feel like i want to die
why is it that you never hear my depressed sigh
why is it when your around i only want to cry

life isn't all good and it isn't all bad
life is something that is usually all sad
life the lesson that is learned through death
life is something to be lived even to you last breath

there are so many things i wish i knew
there is only one thing i know i hate you
wait i didn't mean it i am sorry
please just forgive me i'm the majority

i hate you every so more as the day goes by
i insisted on taking a chance hoping you'd not lie
but instead of getting my just reward
only for a little while my heart sored

then you told me you were keeping a secret
i figured whatever it was we could beat it
i asked you not to do one simple thing
just when i was thinking about giving you the ring

perhaps i am just a small town boy with fairy tale dreams
in this day and age does anyone know what that means?
it means having a girlfriend or wife who doesn't cheat
it's being the one who gets caught staring at her in your seat

it is something that no one can really describe
it's like nothing that a doctor can prescribe
the hurt that it causes you when the one you love cheats
it hurts so much when you thought you were destined to meet

i hope none of you have to feel what i describe in this poem
i know that most of you have and should let it be known
it wasn't your fault there was nothing that you could do
it shouldn't happen and you have no one to blame but you

don't blame yourself cause it wasn't your fault
it was them who opened the chained up vault
why did they have to go and be such a flirt
they were the ones to blame and deserve the hurt

*dedicated to anyone who has ever had their heart broken by someone they claimed loved them, by cheating on them **i have had man**. So for this i dedicate to you all. Nice Guys do finish last.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle Riddle

    This peom was great, i really loved it,

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    i was not trying to offend you, if you would referain from making hurtful comments about my poems and voting for them because i gave yours a fair vote. I put a lot of thought into my poems. I know exactly what i want and it is what i feel.

    I was offering constructive cirtitism. It appears you didn't want any feedback from your poems. Sorry i thought i was helping. Please from now on, if someone gives you a bad review, take it as a compliment, i took the time to read your poem and took the time to judge it. Don't feel hurt or anything and then give one of mine a low rating just because you feel that what i wrote about your poem was unfair.

    If you are going to do that then your not going to have many people looking at your poems, they will just pass them by, i love it when people point out my faults, because then i can work harder and try to get better...but honestly, you shouldn't just lash out because someone gave you a bad rating, i gave you what i thought was a good rating, if you don't want people to judge your poems, why put them up here then?

  • 19 years ago

    by you_use_2luv_me

    your poems is terrible. if you would have thought about it more maybe it would have been good, aey?

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