The reasons that i love you

by PAUL HEWSON   Oct 20, 2004


!!!! not my usual style , cheesy , bit like a script in a valentines card !!!! but hey it was fun : )

the reasons that i love you
and this is number one
i need your tender loving
like gods earth needs the sun .

the reasons that i love you
and this is number two
in my deepest darkest hours
your love has seen me through

the reasons that i love you
and this is number three
from hurt and pain and sorrow
your love has set me free

the reasons that i love you
and this is number four
i need your sweet caress
like the oceans need the shore

theres an endless amount of reasons
but my poem it stops at four
in every minute of everday
i couldn't possibly love you more

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    All I can say is if this is cheesy...bring on the Velveeta. I think it is beautiful. It made my heart flutter...great job~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Hey this is really cool. I like it. Keep it up!

    Please check out my Poems!

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • 19 years ago

    by Hope

    I love it how you use the numbers in order to rhyme and the use of similies while also repeating the reasons 'i love you.' Creative structure. Nice work!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Hmmn make me wonder!!! That was deep and penetrating. Thanks for sharing this. Great write!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by CaL25

    This poem is great! Smooth..

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