by Robert Nov 27, 2004
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
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Evil For Evil |
by NoPatience
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i really like the last 2 lines. they kinda pulled the whole poem 2gether. 5/5 |
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Great poem! 5.0 ♥ |
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WOW!WOW!WOW! This is such a true poem about life ad war! Keep up the great work! |
by ~*Ley*~
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its good. it was a little disconnected at first, but it only got better. again, i think you had a few spelling mistakes. good job though. |
by Frankie
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very patriotic |