Lack of companionship

These are for the ones who do and don't remember
I'll tell you that I'll never forget that dreadful September
when you had told me exactly what, you had done
i had to go for a walk just do anything, go for a run.

*I like how you start this. I feel like I'm watching a movie. It makes me want to keep reading to find out what's next. Good*

i couldn't understand why this always had to happen
i didn't know if it was something that i was lacking
i am a nice guy if your nice to me..why is it always me
why couldn't it be someone else for change...instead of me

*I love the use of rhetorical questions, they are always a nice add to a poem. I also like that it's personal too. I can relate to what you're saying about it always being you*

i wish that i could explain to you in this poem what is wrong
but i can't because i don't so i just live life...just living on
i don't know much about anything or how to live your life
but i know trying to end it was worse then what she did that night

*This part was really sad. I like how the pain your feeling keeps you from explaining what happened.*

i know that all my feelings lately have been really sad
i was going through life never knowing I'd been had
i wish my life where better but it won't ever be for me
i am destined to live out my life..night after night lonely

*Aww what a sad ending. I really liked this one. I thought this was your best work because it displays true heartfelt emotions and you can't fake that. Very nice work. Shanik*