Little Girl

by xRachelx   Jan 2, 2005


Little girl,
She was lost and alone.
Got bullied at school,
Had problems at home.

Little girl,
She was confused and sad.
Her mum was a drunk,
Her daddy went mad.

Little girl,
She was beaten and hurt.
The parents she trusted,
Left blood on her shirt.

Little girl,
She was falling apart.
The boy that she loved,
Was breaking her heart.

Little girl,
She couldn't take no more.
Her family found her,
Sprawled on the floor.

Little girl,
Got rushed to intensive care.
But the doctors and nurses,
Couldn't save her there.

Little girl,
Finally saved.
By packets of paracetamol,
And the vodka she craved.

Little girl,
She can finally smile.
She always would of wanted,
To go out with style....

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  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    WOW, amazingly written...So sad though, but perfect!!! I really love it!!! You have talent, keep writing!! 5 again...

    *hugs Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥ Rejekted

    awesome poem! i loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Aww oh my gosh this was so sad.. :( But you wrote it very well.. I hope this isn't true about you, but if it is, my heart goes out to you. Thank you for the comment, it meant a lot to me. Take care & keep writing!

    God bless you! <3

  • 19 years ago

    by †Rachel†

    thats really good...its so simple yet effective!!! i really like it. xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    Wow, that's a really good poem!! It flows really great and just it's really good!! I like the "By packets of paracetamol, And the vodka she craved." that's original and different...good job!!!

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