Why were you the victim?

by chavii   Jan 3, 2005


Another murder,another sin,
oh! my dear cousin why were you the victim?

Your little daughter waiting for you anxiously, your infant is crying ,but you are not around to hold them tight .

Tears are not drying, my heart full of grief .
our childhood memories now haunts me in my sleep.
your smiling face now pierces me deep.

Your unnatural death have left me bewildered,doesnt make any sense to me.
why these has to happen, why were you the victim?

may your soul rest in peace,
whereever you are , do look upon your little sis....

*dedicated 2 my cousin sis who died last month(dec. 2004)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Your poems are more like stories than poems, but I can't rate them lower than a five, because of how much soul and caring you put into your writing, that deserves a five because writing from the heart and soul beats simply writing or even writing with advanced literatary techniques or vocabulary. Nice job.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I m sorry (thats all i can say)
    Beautifully written

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Rakesh

    Im sorry abt what befell ur cousin ..must hav been a difficult time.

    You have brought out ur love for ur sis in this poem..well written.
    May her soul rest in peace.
    -Rakesh.

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    I feel sorry for the loss of your cousin...Sad and quiet touching poem...Good to see another Indian...Hope to read more of your poems in future...and i also like your quotes...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by chavii

    i know she is in paradise coz tats the place where angels like her must rest.

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