Dry Your Eyes

by Emilia   Jan 6, 2005


A Note From "Him" :

I've done one bad thing in my life
Actually I did it twice

I'm so sorry that I've made your heart bleed
I'm so sorry you're the only one I need

This isn't who I wanted to be
This isn't what I wanted you to see

I just want to dry the tears from your eyes and start a new life

The life I want to start with you
I know I've made you blue

Please can you forgive me
It would never happened again you see

I don't love the other girl
You mean everything to me

It was just a kiss
You know it's you I miss

Love from David

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A Note From Me:

I can't love you
You've made me so blue

You've done it twice
Well, darling that takes the price

So leave me alone
Good bye, So long

from September.

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I like the first part better...good job with the rhyming. Very nice.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    wow...piecy, but effective. at first, i didn't understand the spread out structure, but at the end, i didn't care. Job well done. 4/5.

    christa//no motiv?

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    very nice poem..i likew you u described what happened from 2 points of view

  • Hey I liked that~great job, as always, don't really know what to say:/ cept good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    sad but i guess he deserved it well like ur poems alot!