Lady suicide

by Jacob Perry   Feb 11, 2005


She told me to follow
i did with out a thought
she took all my pain away
scratches on my arm

she told me not to fear the pain
she told me not to worry
just to follow aimlessly
and not worry about what happened to me

i bowed my head to her breast
and she did her work
i did not cry
i just sat and enjoyed

release was mine
her hands were like magic
i closed my eyes
going tantric

then i fell
in nothin but bliss
the pain of this life
finally extinguished

the lady was my helper
the one i owe the most
lady suicide, my best friend
the one who helped it all to end

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  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is really beautiful...

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    This one gave me chills at the end. i havent come across a poem that descibed sucicide like this, yet, great job.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    OMG! I can see why there have been 10 votes and it's still a 5! This is WONDERFUL! I can't WAIT to read more of your stuff. You're now on my favorites list! Congrats! lol!

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    This Poem was very interesting..I like how you compared suicide to the help of a lady...a very unique way of discribing something as tragic a that...Good Job..Joc

  • 18 years ago

    by TearsLeftUndried

    O0o0 that was like... w0w. I liked it a lot! **claps** Well keep it up!!

    ~*~Elisha~*~

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