The fight I want back

by Finalgravedigger   Feb 19, 2005


I was once a kickboxer with a raging feeling which I only saw within the few a feeling which would drive you on no matter how many times you were punched or kicked.

I finally lost that feeling and realized I was weaker without it the feeling to practically murder your oppnent and scare them out of their wits. I finally saw it in my friend and realized how my oppents felt when they versed some one with a true fighter instinct . Which I can no longer call my self but still I feel for that feeling to come back so I can fight even stronger once again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    This is really beautiful poem, but you need to descibe more deeply how u feels.

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Nice poems but you could make them better by writing them in poem form instead of paragraph form coz when you write it as a paragraph it is just like you voicing your opinion. and you want your opinion voiced but not like a paper for an english class.

  • 19 years ago

    by Harlequin[let me put you to sleep]

    that was a good poem, thanx for the comment on mine

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Your poems are all about fighting. Seems as though that's your true love. In this one you talk about how you *had been* a kickboxer. Do u not do it anymore?

  • 19 years ago

    by Laura Gillespie

    i like how you put this poem, wow must have been hard with all the rage and then finding out that you would just get weaker but hey don't give up there your still great..... Laura101 email ma sometimes at.... killredgummybear@hotmail.com

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