My last goodbye

by chavii   Mar 18, 2005


This is the time, i knew by instinct
when i must bid my last goodbye to Friends and relatives.

From my deathbed i gaze the bright blue sky, full of hopes and new life.

With a deep sigh i found the day perfect to embark my new journey from life to an unknown destiny.

My spirits became calm n composed i felt no fear or pain to cloud over my thoughts.

I took a journey down to memory lane ,eighty decades ago when i drew my first breath.

One by one i unfolded my long preserved memories with smiles and tears i took this last journey.

Life have been a long unpredicted mystery ,at times filled with overwhelming happiness at times insufferable with pain and agony.

I closed my eyes followed with a silent prayer and experienced a blissful feel of heavenly nature.

Finding myself surrounded with known and dear faces i found comfort and my ultimate strength.

With little difficulty i managed a fragile smile and in low voice whispered "my last goodbye".

--chavii--

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this was an amazing poem indeed!! very nicely written...great piece of work!!

    all the best and take care!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rakesh

    Oh Wow..a strong articulative poem abt a subject I havent read many poems abt..to say the least it was great.
    I liked the ending the title is very apt....keep writitng.

    -Rakesh

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    nice write, chavii. very well done.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

    btw, ur from india! i just saw that! :) which city? may i know...

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow, a beautiful poem you have written here, very good!!! I loved it, keep up the good work and thanks for you comment on my poem, read more if you get the chance =0) I will be back to read more of your poems.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Really a very touching and beautiful poem....a poem i guess many one can relate to...take care and keep smiling always...FIVE>>>